Friday, 8 November 2019

writing with shelly

so on wensday our teacher was not here so we had shelly yay!

so for writing we got some story starters then we had to go on the sight that is on our gmail we click and thats were all of the story starters were

the story starter i did was If you could live inside any video game, which would you choose? Why?

then i didk my story and its about a game called gta

enjoy :):):):)

Woooooow What am I doing here oh let's get the setting so it says of what will i be doing it says you will i be doing challenges and killing diving driving away from cops and stealing guns So pick a character Characters Franklin Trevor Michael Lets go franklin 1 minute later Wow where am i well i think it obvious because i think im in franklins house. So the street is strawberry street in los santos So what do i do now oh yea lets ride the lambo Nek minnit wait what wheres my lambo I check the setting bruh youe stupid you have to get you own car stupid or steal other people cars Oh Lets go steal 1 hour later Beep beep beep beep beep Oh my gosh run lets get in the car He stole a mc claren any way get back to the story Lets drive oh crap to late the police you know what stuff it later bo I was drifting and going of limit of speed nek minnit the police Shot me with a pistol
nice job try hard rip

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tini, I'm Bella from Yaldhurst model school in Rimu. I like your story, but I don't really understand the spellying and maybe use speech marks for when a character is talking and use punctuation for it. Did you enjoy writing the story? Would you make something like this again?
    Kind regards,
    Bella

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