I was a student at St Bernadette’s Primary School. This is a place where I shared my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 13 September 2019
the villian and he dragons layer
but the sort of writing was collabrative writing
so in the writing we used story starters for our setting characters and problem ours is the villian and the dragons lair
so we all had to make a slide from a slideshow then we write what happen and i couldent't do this by myself so i got friends that helped me Talia,Tyler,Liam make sure you go to there blog to
and comment if i need to change anything
here is my writing and i hope you can see the writing clearly
and here you go my writing
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