I was a student at St Bernadette’s Primary School. This is a place where I shared my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 11 September 2019
rain stopped play
the story map has to add
characters,setting,problem,feelings,action and outcome
and in our reading group were also learning about ITTM
which means i think that means that bla bla bla and the pint of this is making sure that you know and everyone else know that you understand what the text means
here is my mind and plz comment what i should fix on this mindmup
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Hi Tini, It's Mark.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you gave a lot of information about the fictional story we did, and you really added a lot of it and you were being specific.
This reminds me of when I also did it, and I needed to add a lot of information because it's not gonna be too much information for my Story Web.
Maybe next time you should add Capital Letters on the beginning of the sentence. I like it though
Mark
thanks brother mark i will make sure i have more capital letters and also i saw your one yours has way more info then me your one is better
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