Wednesday, 19 September 2018

the gren pill

The green pill

 When i was 2 years old i was going hiking at the forest but soon i got lost i was separated from my family i was scared that i couldn't find them forever but but that was good that i went to school to survive in the forest every day i had to eat huhu grubs gross but the the person that was teaching us said it has protein and we can find them in old trees it was getting late i had nowhere to sleep so i made a hut so i can survive in the forest. Soon this person came to me and said are you alright i said yes in a sore throat i was so tired i ignored the person talking to me so he took me to a different place in his own cabin lucky he had food even he has a nintendo switch and a tv but he took me to his lab and there were pills i chose green because it is a good flavor mint but something was wrong with me i was turning into a turtle then i said cheetah then i ran as fast as I could to the forest then i said bird i was flapping my wings but I couldn’t fly a was a little bird so i said a flying bird so i was flying around the forest i saw people so flew as fast as i could just like dash from the incredibles zoom then cheetah zoooooooooom i got there in ten seconds but it was just kids but i heard a person that said my name . my name is manuk what this little girl anglica said hi cheetah i transformed to human and she said can turn into a puppy ok puppy pug ok i replied enough why did i pick the green so i walked and said normal human it’s getting dark better go asleep. So the next day i said cheetah but it didn’t work i said all animals but it didn’t work so i walked there i got there at twelve o'clock in the morning when i got there i told him why have my powers gone its because it only last a day well then i have another one all of them are gone YOU HAD THE LAST ONE why are you angry because i lost my family wait what what's your last name evans First name Kaunteya brother i found a family member yes i can survive with my brother The end

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tini, I really like your story and how you had a twist to the end. It was really cool and interesting because you explained what your character would do. Maybe next time you could check if it makes sense?

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