Wednesday, 19 September 2018

if i was poor

I was starving  i was poor soon i saw every shop but i had no money  but there was a shop that said free then i went in there were food everywhere then i presents decoration no one was in then a person came in then i hide and ate when i hided it was a customer then still ate then the customer said anyone here i have twenty dollars to buy something i said to myself what have i done i stood up and said here give me the money a buy anything food decorations presents then i got in trouble the customer got another on because the sign said by one get one free. what did i do !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well at least i have twenty $ i looked in my hand there was no twenty$ then a worker stand next to me and said here here is one hundred dollars  then the worker said buy the things you ate then i payed then i had no money then on the roads there was a taxi and on the floor was 9 grand of money i went in then he took me to the same shop and the same worker this is going to be bad .

2 comments:

  1. Hi Tini its Niamh here I thing this is a fantastic story one thing you can work on is re-read it to make shore it makes scene.

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    1. thank you niamh i will re read it so it will make sence bye

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