free writing

so for writing we did free writing and we had to pick any writing planning you want so for mine i did persuassive

so mines about why we should have pc computers at school

Hi Mr norman I was thinking about why our school should have pc’s computer. I was thinking of how much of the computers i was like 5 so it goes around in a circle in the seniors like Rm4 Mr matai picks his 5 and Mrs lee pick her five for her class and miss wilton picks her five for her class . The reason why i want computers is because sometimes classes like really works hard And especially boys including me tini. I think that boys like they always like to play on the pc or ps4 and all that but like since us boys do like electronic things then I think the boys will really work hard on there work to earn it. like it's mostly boys that play more games than girls but it's not just only for boys, girls can go if they work hard and they didn’t want to go Like well school is can be frustrating but there’s a reason why your here And the time to stay on the computer will be twenty minutes of their own time like lunch or morning tea. The teachers when they see people being good and working hard the teachers will write their names on the board for them to go on the computers. If there are going to be silly then the teachers can rub their name off the board I think where you should put it if you think this is a good idea is maybe in room 8 were that little spare room . So if this happen i will appreciate that From tini