so for the past few weeks we have been learning about paragraphs and as our teacher left the paragraph should always have seer s is for starting statement e is for explanation e is for examples and r is for relavance i did a writing about my weekend and i hope you enjoy it
This is what i enjoyed my weekend
So on my weekend it's fun,boring,tiring and weird let me tell you
So for example the tiring thing I stayed up until 4 am for my sister to comeback from australia i hated that night.but the boring thing is playing mortal kombat at 4 am and fortnite nessa was in the room playing league of legends and the fun thing is that it's the next day and my rugby is on and fortnite i played then got a hiding and yeah mostly technology and going outside to the park walking the dog and the weird thing is on sunday i thought it was sunday i woke up at 6 am got change for rugby then my mum wouldn't wake so i went to my sister and she was awake but the i said hey what you doing narnia are you kidding me idiah then she wrote a not saying it's sunday you dumbo oh
So this is what happened , I think the best part is rugby and playing fortnite mortal kombat well i hope this weekend will go again unlike a scruffy weekend well ok bye and wait and have a great day bye
if you guys enjoyed this writing and the pictures thank you and what did you do in the weekend have a great day
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