Thursday, 16 August 2018

samurai


I was a kid called ninja master of fortnite call me kid ninja. I was watching marshmallow the good fortnite player, then soon the video glitched.  turned it on again then I went somewhere black and grey there were bones for the path way it was gross. I was feeling dark in the inside and good in the outside then this tiger came from the sky  then I felt weird. Suddenly I saw this sign it said the wonderful world of death land.Then the tiger was cracking bones and biting them I said to him hey are with me he couldn't understand then I went to this cave and said weapons not allowed and danger spot then I went inside and said mission get the crystal before the storm comes.

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  1. Anonymous10 September 2018 at 19:04

    Kia ora Tini, what a fantastic piece of writing. I love that you have included detail and have left us on a cliff hanger. I want to know more! What was your favourite part of writing this story? My advice would be to make sure that you re-read it and make sure it makes sense. There is a couple of sentences that are missing words. Keep up the fantastic work!

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